the morrow

I don't mean to assert my opinion, though its rather pellucid in my post. I certainly don't want this to be a locked article like the abortion essay! XxxDo, I ...

I enjoyed this. It has depth and insight, and looks beyond the issue of ethics into the much more complex and relevant (and frequently neglected) area of social and legal ...

We share similar frustrations, JustMe. Are you thinking of majoring in journalism?

Maybe Azila meant that it just doesn't seem to have a significant theme. Like Prokaryote said, it's enjoyable, but in a rather pointless way.

Good writing, but it seems like a lot of summary is shoveled into too small an area. Spread the background information around a bit.

You may want to space out your paragraphs for easier readability.

Like SeraphTree said, please space out your paragraphs.

Good pacing; my usually fleeting interest was preserved the whole way through. Two suggestions: 1. Mention the weather of the place. This may help to solidify the mood. 2. Leo ...

Short and juicy. The imagery brings some concrete footing to an otherwise abstract topic.